Well, this is actually really, rather good. I like how you've managed to get the colours mostly right, but (I'm sorry if this offends you) I think Mary's nose looks a bit too 'out of proportion' with the rest of her face, but otherwise Mary's rather good. And Matthews face is amazing, but I don't really like how I can see all of the strokes you used to get his jacket and I don't really like how it goes from grey on his jacket to plain white. But aside from Matthew's jacket, the rest is brilliant. The background is effective and you've made it look blurred well, and I like the light on Mary's body as it really shows where the light is coming from. Sorry if the ratings are a bit harsh, by the way... But well done - really. Any artwork I try to do of people never looks how the people are supposed to look so I really do think this is good - much, much better than I could ever do!